The idea the government leaders were compassionate/kind in the 60s was factual. I used the word factual because the statement was true. The President Johnson legislation made a good use of money. Themes to consider when thinking about this topic are culture and change. For example, the government leaders being kind during the 60s caused a great change on culture. For instance, lines 2-3 states “The Great Society vastly expanded the welfare state and included initiatives such as the War on Poverty.” This allows us to see that the government wanted to help out those who needed it. In conclusion, we see a major focus on culture because the government gave the lower-class the help they needed so they could live a better or easier life. This was important because it helps us to understand the past better. Perhaps people should realize that the legislation did a great thing and that no money was wasted from the actions that the government made.
Nice post! I focused on this sentence “Perhaps people should realize that the legislation did a great thing and that no money was wasted from the actions that the government made.” This grabbed my attention. Because you stated your own opinion and it made sense. Your post made me feel like you were right about everything you said. You had good evidence as well. I suggest that you add more. Maybe if you would’ve added more then it would make it a lot more better. I rated your work a 3. Nice picture by the way. My question to you is do you think all government leaders are good for the community?
Great work! I focused on “the president Johnson’s legislation made a good Use of money “. I agree with that statement president Johnson was a good man who wanted to help Americans .He did his best he made things happen, I also like your choice of picture.I rate you a 3 out of 3 ;What made you choose that picture out of all pictures ?
Great work! I focused on “ the president Johnson legislation made a good use of money “ . I much so agree with this statement cause he was a good man and all he was trying to do was help America. I like your work everything is valid ,I feel like I learned a little more about president Johnson by reading your work. I rate you a 3 out of 3 ;I also like your picture why you choose this picture?
ice work! I focused on “This allow us to see that they both had a different point of view towards their community.” This grabbed my attention because this is true. This made me feel like I know more about the community and what your president would do for you. I suggest for you to keep this up . I rated your post 3 stars. Why do you think what the president did was a good cause?
Nice work! I focused on “This allow us to see a better point of view towards our community.” This grabbed my attention because this is true. This made me feel like I know more about the situation. I suggest for the future you should read over your work before you post. I rated your post 3 stars. Why do you think what the president done for us was a good cause ?
Excellent work! I would score your essay a . I mainly focused on this sentence,” This allows us to see that the government wanted to help out those who needed it.” This statement gave me a good idea of your perspective, but the government only didn’t help the ones who needed help he made it better for the society. The government gave medicare and medicaid to poor and elderly people who was stuck in poverty. I really like your choice in picture because it really shows that governments gave money to people who really needed it. Next time go more in details about poverty in the 1960s. Do you think it was only poor and elderly people in poverty?
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Excellent work! I would score your essay a 3. I mainly focused on this sentence,” This allows us to see that the government wanted to help out those who needed it.” This statement gave me a good idea of your perspective, but the government only didn’t help the ones who needed help he made it better for the society. The government gave medicare and medicaid to poor and elderly people who was stuck in poverty. I really like your choice in picture because it really shows that governments gave money to people who really needed it. Next time go more in details about poverty in the 1960s. Do you think it was only poor and elderly people in poverty?
Excellent work! I rate your work 2 out of 3. I mainly on the sentence, “This allows us to see that the government wanted to help out those who needed it. In conclusion, we see a major focus on culture because the government gave the lower-class the help they needed so they could live a better or easier life.” This statement gave me a good a better understanding, of how the government was willing to take finical aid to support the low income families who claimed the government didn’t care about them. This makes me feel more supportive of our government. However next time use a picture more specific to the topic. Also, why should I realize that the legislation did a great thing with the money? How come it couldn’t be what the government suppose to do?
Excellent work. I was very focus on your”Perhaps people should realize that the legislation did a great thing and that no money was wasted from the actions that the government made.” I was very interesting in you work because you use really good facts. I suggest you work on improvement. How would you prove they weren’t wasting money?
Decent! I focused on this sentence “Perhaps people should realize that the legislation did a great thing and that no money was wasted from the actions that the government made.” I focused on that because I like how you used your on opinion and not what you’ve seen already. Your post made me feel like I learned more about president Johnson then I had known before. I like how you citied your evidence to backup what you were talking about. Overall I rated your work a 3. My question is do you think all governments are good governments ?
Decent job! I would score your essay a 2. I mainly focus on this sentence, “This allows us to see that the government wanted to help out those who needed it.” This statement gave me a good understanding of your perspective on what your are talking about. I agree with this statement because the government was trying to give money to the people who really needed. I really like your choice in picture it really represents on what you are talking about. Next time I consider s that you add more details in your essay. My question is Do the government always help people in his community?
Great work! I focused on this sentence: “This allows us to see that the government wanted to help out those who needed it.” This statement gave me a good understanding of your perspective, but I wish you gave more details about why you feel that way. This make be feel that I can’t trust on this topic because I wouldn’t get all the necessary information. However, I really like your picture and how it relates to the topic at hand. Next time I suggest that you provide more information and go into more details about how you feel about this topic. Overall I rate your work a 2 out of 3. How would you help the lower class people in that time??
Nice work. I mainly focused on this sentence “This allows us to see that the government wanted to help out those who needed it.” Because you should have added more detail . This post made me feel as if you know what you talking about based on your evidence . In the future focus more on how the people felt .How would you feel if you had help when you needed it?
Nice post! I focused on the sentence “The Great Society vastly expanded the welfare state and included initiatives such as the War on Poverty.” This caught my eye because it allows us to see that the government wanted to help out those who needed it. I like how you explained everything your work is good. I like your picture by the way what made you use it? what does it stand for ?
I used that picture to show that they actually gave something to those who needed it and that whoever they gave it to would accept it with no problem
great work! my main focused on the persident johnos made a godd use of money. i agree with the staeement cause he was a very good man i also whanted to ask yo why did u choose that picture?
Wonderful job! “This allows us to see that the government wanted to help out those who needed it.” this grabbed my attention because this made me understand your point of view based on the topic. This made me feel like you understand that money could be used to good use. I suggest you work on keeping up the good work. What would you have done differently to help ?
Good Work. I acknowledged this certain sentence in your paragraph, “This allows us to see that the government wanted to help out those who needed it.” I definitely agree with your statement since, the Great Society was such a great idea. It helped many poor people and balanced out the economical situation the U.S. was in. This made me feel like we have the same point that we wan to get across. I’m pretty sure both of us can ensure that the Great Society was a good time in the U.S. that made organizations and schools better and made more opportunities for the unfortunate people. For future purposes, you should try and input complex words that would make your paragraph seem more high school level. Also, you should input commas or semi colons in between your transition words. I rate your work 2 out of 3. You did a above average job on explaining your side of the story. My question for you is, do you believe the Great Society could help the poor people of today. Or will it be irrelevant since, the world doesn’t adjust to change very well.
Good job! You did a great job. You said “This allows us to see that the government wanted to help out those who needed it.” I score you a 3. I agree with everything yo said. In the future, use stronger words to make your essay even better. Why do think people should realize that no money was wasted in the actions the government made?
Awesome Post! I focused on the sentences,”This allows us to see that the government wanted to help out those who needed it. In conclusion, we see a major focus on culture because the government gave the lower-class the help they needed so they could live a better or easier life.” because I totally agree with your opinion. Your post made me feel like we could agree on this topic because, I had similar ideas. In the future I suggest you go back and double check for small errors. Overall I rated your work 3 out of 3, keep up the good work! Do you poverty can be eradicated?
Splendid Work! This following sentence caught my attention, “In conclusion, we see a major focus on culture because the government gave the lower-class the help they needed so they could live a better or easier life. ” I focused on this because it gives me your opinion on how you saw that culture was being impacted. I agree that the government gave the lower-class people money to help them have a better life. I really liked your picture choice and how one hand is giving money to another. Some might say that the picture represents how people were lay and just waiting on money to be given to them. But in my opinion I think that the government were doing it for a good cause. Therefore I rate your essay a 3 out of 3. In addition, I suggest next time try to give more detail to your, “perhaps people should…” that is your opinion and I want to know it. Why do you think the government wanted to help lower-class people out? Do you think that they should have kept that money to themselves instead of giving it to helps peoples lives?
Good job! Your work made me feel as if you have strong feelings about this topic. The sentence in your text that I mainly focused on was,” In conclusion, we see a major focus on culture because the government gave the lower-class the help they needed so they could live a better or easier life.” This sentence wrapped everything you were talking about in your work, as it should. I feel as if you did a great job on your conclusion sentence. Overall I rate your work a 2/3. Also, if you had power at this time, what would you do in your position and which side would you support considering all details?
Nice work! I focused on ” This allows us to see that the government wanted to help out those who needed it.” This grabbed my attention because it is a believable statement. This post made me feel like I know more about It. I suggest that you keep up the good work. I rated your work 3 stars. Why is your passage short?
Great work! I focused on this sentence “Perhaps people should realize that the legislation did a great thing and that no money was wasted from the actions that the government made.” This grabbed my attention because this statement is so true and its perfect evidence. Your post made me feel like everything was right. In the future, I suggest that you keep up the great work. I like your picture because it make sense to what you wrote and its understandable. I rated your work a 3 out of 3. My question is: Do you think the government did a great job saving the community?
Yes i do think the government did a great job at saving the community with their ideas even if it couldn’t help everyone they still did a good thing.
Nice post! I focused on, “This allows us to see that the government wanted to help out those who needed it.” It grabbed my attention because I agree with your statement. Johnson had a variety of programs that helped. He had programs that helped in a lot of different things such as, school, jobs, and even medical. Your post made me feel informed. Next time, give more evidence for your opinion. Backed up work equals an amazing explanation. The more evidence you have the more you would convince others to agree with you. I rate you work a 2. Do you agree with how President Johnson handled people in need?
great job! I rate your work a 2 out of 3. I focused on you sentence “This allows us to see that the government wanted to help out those who needed it.” This statement let me know what side you are on. I feel that the situation could have gone both ways, it was a good and a bad thing but it depends on what perspective you see it from. my suggestion to you is next time have more details make your decision on how you see it stand out. Do you agree that giving money to the poor could be a good and a bod thing?
great job! I really liked you sentence “This allows us to see that the government wanted to help out those who needed it. In conclusion, we see a major focus on culture because the government gave the lower-class the help they needed so they could live a better or easier life.” I liked this sentence because it is true. your work made me feel like you really understand what was going on due to your evidence and details. my suggestion is that maybe picked I stronger picture to relay your message. I give your work a 3 out of 3. what do you think would have happened if he didn’t help out the poor?
Nice post! “The President Johnson legislation made a good use of money.” This statement captured my attention because, although I do agree, I don’t necessarily think it is a good statement that could decently summarize the big idea of this time period. It’s too opinionated to be honest. Your work made me feel as though you had a decent understanding regarding the topic at hand. One suggestion that I’d like for you to make is for you to go into more detail when discussing any topic so you can thoroughly get your point across. I’d rate this post as a 2 out of a 3. How did this topic help you understand the past better?